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I do, however, have some things to mention about the proportions of her tummy and breasts. The way her stomach cuts off into three rolls on the right just doesnt sit well as opposed to drawing it symmetrical to the left to have it match her width and frame and make the stomach appear more whole overall. Nothing is wrong with how the breasts were drawn, although I do suggest they be made bigger to become proportionate to her size. But I realize that can be a matter of preference to the artist and the characters design. The lineart, while colorful, couldve used some work as it is untidy.
Very good work! I personally would like to see more of Miry in the future.
I gladly accept the critique about the breasts being too small and of course about the lineart (you couldn't be more right, I'm working on it a lot). The belly not being symmetrical however, was on purpose ^_^ I was trying to make it look as if one of her legs were making more pressure on the belly than the other one. I admit I could have done it in a not too clear way, or in a completely wrong way, though ^_^
Thanks for commenting, and I am glad you liked it
Nice work